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✨ Polished Review:
My friend and I truly enjoyed this trip. It was a full, jam-packed day filled with diverse experiences. A personal highlight was the peaceful walk into the rainforest, as well as the final stop at the oyster shop. Our guide, Pascal, was phenomenal: professional, engaging, and fun! He provided us with a rich immersion into Bruny Island, covering its history, gourmet food and wine, stunning landscapes, unique vegetation, and even insights into modern education and city development. We are very grateful for today!
A quick tip: the island’s weather can be unpredictable, so be sure to bring windproof and waterproof jackets, and dress in layers, even during summer!